why is my family important to me?

my family is important to me because they care about me and think about our famliy and they buy for me that I need and that I want and my mom send me Tae kwon Do, math academy, english academy and AIS school. my father earn money for me give a courage and jokes on me. my  brother loves take cares of me and some times ply with me, I think my family is like happy and gods in heaven.

goal for improvement

next time I want to improve to others seeing audience, speak clearly, use more intonation, don't put book my face, more emotions and needs to pause like realaxible.

feed back sandwhich

I did well about i pointed the pictures where I'm reading.
I have to speak clearly and see the audience
I did well about the it was detailed and colorful poster.